tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1452234259074820196.post1679380978733059855..comments2024-03-18T10:03:45.835-07:00Comments on 21 Wits, by Karen: The Mag 15221 Witshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00071361755673253230noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1452234259074820196.post-26987509786382491432013-01-23T03:08:42.259-08:002013-01-23T03:08:42.259-08:00I, too, most loved the ending...but felt deeply th...I, too, most loved the ending...but felt deeply the entire poem. Lydiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11135393270656573516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1452234259074820196.post-13749848822829647892013-01-22T03:21:00.343-08:002013-01-22T03:21:00.343-08:00May you have many more such golden afternoons. It ...May you have many more such golden afternoons. It stops soon enough, in its own time but quick footsteps and laughter do postpone the end. Stafford Rayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03048757515249725540noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1452234259074820196.post-63594191103183183252013-01-22T03:18:25.667-08:002013-01-22T03:18:25.667-08:00Lovely lines. "Candy-coated chatter" - l...Lovely lines. "Candy-coated chatter" - lovely mental image.Alan Burnetthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01015127443616786425noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1452234259074820196.post-15554567862371492382013-01-21T18:37:36.181-08:002013-01-21T18:37:36.181-08:00Holding hands always makes the walk better ... no ...Holding hands always makes the walk better ... no matter the location. :) Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1452234259074820196.post-6489877831890534832013-01-21T12:31:31.603-08:002013-01-21T12:31:31.603-08:00I especially like the ending...
hands clasped
hea...I especially like the ending...<br /><br />hands clasped<br />hearts anchored<br /> <br />lovely<br /><br />=)Susan Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1452234259074820196.post-91189081376277761842013-01-21T10:14:18.139-08:002013-01-21T10:14:18.139-08:00Very touching. I find walks through cemeteries fas...Very touching. I find walks through cemeteries fascinating. Helenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13447013188405986054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1452234259074820196.post-11744102281462600132013-01-21T09:43:34.349-08:002013-01-21T09:43:34.349-08:00Karen a very well written piece, your words paint ...Karen a very well written piece, your words paint the picture... well done! darlinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04886502544010479581noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1452234259074820196.post-6876545886297011132013-01-21T08:16:29.794-08:002013-01-21T08:16:29.794-08:00Wonderful imagery Karen, and like all good poems, ...Wonderful imagery Karen, and like all good poems, it can be interpreted on many levels. Some beautifully descriptive lines too.Little Nellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11862657943846727987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1452234259074820196.post-4157121349003869302013-01-21T04:48:58.766-08:002013-01-21T04:48:58.766-08:00There is the delightful line others have mentioned...There is the delightful line others have mentioned too 'candy coated laughter' and I also like the rhyme of 'After the laughter'. <br />I wonder where your picture at the bottom is from? Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1452234259074820196.post-22247939208284027362013-01-21T03:31:30.524-08:002013-01-21T03:31:30.524-08:00Loved the imagery of two young ones, holding hands...Loved the imagery of two young ones, holding hands and braving the walk through the woods!<br />Hugs<br />SueAnnSueannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05299288406218968621noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1452234259074820196.post-13542408180258773552013-01-21T02:42:44.430-08:002013-01-21T02:42:44.430-08:00great poem - hands clasped, hearts anchored is par...great poem - hands clasped, hearts anchored is particularly effective for meDon't Feed The Pixieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05380146661526476947noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1452234259074820196.post-31181932968364917012013-01-21T02:17:23.941-08:002013-01-21T02:17:23.941-08:00I like this poem, really exquisite.I like this poem, really exquisite.Leovihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14970831445283294241noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1452234259074820196.post-23913855480604388262013-01-21T01:56:44.131-08:002013-01-21T01:56:44.131-08:00The mind's eye recaptures...The mind's eye recaptures...Berownehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09524661173663604641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1452234259074820196.post-90130884355211829192013-01-21T00:39:45.030-08:002013-01-21T00:39:45.030-08:00Yep, some excellent lines in this.Yep, some excellent lines in this.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1452234259074820196.post-16641015085498766272013-01-20T21:08:06.681-08:002013-01-20T21:08:06.681-08:00"candy-coated chatter"
BRAVO
Happy A... "candy-coated chatter"<br />BRAVO<br /><br /><br /><br /><br />Happy Aloha to YOU<br />from Honolulu, <br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Comfort Spiral</a><br /> ~ > < } } ( ° ><br /> > < } } ( ° >Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1452234259074820196.post-65873734949050158742013-01-20T20:38:33.213-08:002013-01-20T20:38:33.213-08:00Kids are amazingly capable of happiness anywhere! ...Kids are amazingly capable of happiness anywhere! I like your poem, thanks.izzyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06379007428464069723noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1452234259074820196.post-31087338960327513632013-01-20T19:45:24.429-08:002013-01-20T19:45:24.429-08:00Beautifully expressed! 'Hands clasped, hearts ...Beautifully expressed! 'Hands clasped, hearts anchored' really spoke to me. AM Zafaranhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15011799280200118700noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1452234259074820196.post-41045288860531616612013-01-20T18:32:12.355-08:002013-01-20T18:32:12.355-08:00Beautiful. "Shared candy-coated chatter"...Beautiful. "Shared candy-coated chatter"...that line says so much.Gailhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04219479223227928561noreply@blogger.com