It's Saturday again..........and gosh Jenny escaped once more from the torments of this week's prompt! Ah it's okay....with a prompt like (Exit 181, 1/2 mile ahead) you could go almost anywhere really............but mine won't take place in Arizona....oh no....
Carly drove the hot bustling interstate through a never-ending colossal of Redwood trees along Oregon ’s astonishing countryside. She left Phoenix , Oregon without breakfast still hashing over stories of hysteria her grandmother told about a haunting frenzy across Oregon ’s mountains and prairies long ago. Those words still haunted her,
“If you don’t behave, the Chuchonnyhoof will get you!”
Always fearing this “iron-hide” Kalapuya goblin named Chuchonnyhoof, Carly promised herself that one day she would seek the truth to this legend. Suddenly, the town of Salem , Oregon sprung up from nowhere. This was her Exit 181, ½ mile ahead.
Thanks again for viewing my Saturday Centus and don't forget Jenny would love to hear your version of it as well! So give it a try why don't you!
13 comments:
Leaving us in suspense today!
And is the Chuchy-whatever a real bogey man? I'd never heard of him.
Well done. I liked it!
Chew-chuny-hoof?
Chuck-honey-hoof?
He must be keeper of those nasty word verifications. I so hope she finds him and puts an end to all that nonsense! :o)
Seriously, though...really enjoyed your Centus and the creative approach you took. Wonderful job!
Karen, you have such "wit!!" I loved this!!
Had to laugh at 5th Sister's comment about word verifications.
NIce take on the Centus. Original.
=)
great story...it left me wondering what she was going to meet up with her exit...kind of scary.
Very well written and mysterious...this girl loves a good mystery!!!
Goodness! Scary stuff! Brill!
Very intriguing...can't say I've ever heard of the 'Chuch'...well done ;-) Peace and blessings
Very clever! Galen, in Portland, Oregon!
okay ... sounds like a scary legend ...
Chuchonnyhoof ? Your imagination is dancing double ball time! This is mysterious and whimsical at the same time, which makes for a great little story. I love it - and I want to know more about Chuchonnyhoof. (Please).
Namaste..........ccj
I've been to Oregon many a time and never encounted the ...ummm...you know... I think I'm gonna have to have my husband check in the closet tonight for a ... well...you know!
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