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SATURDAY CENTUS
Jenny, from "Off on my tangent" is still dreaming of autumn
for our centus today!
for our centus today!
Not to exceed 109 words
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our prompt is- "The leaves crunched under my boots until they didn't."
I watched him leave never hearing a word I said.
I cried a thousand tears
as the leaves crunched under my boots until they didn't.
as the leaves crunched under my boots until they didn't.
On our wedding day....
I groaned silently behind my wedding party and ignored their banter with a passing Viking fan.
I felt miserable knowing my fidgety nephews waited eagerly.
I noticed my dashing groom flash his hurry-up expression, but I had to find what was stuck in my shoe.
Like always, the best man was eager to console me.
Finally, I realized
struggling with tears, but weeping more with joy knowing
it had always been our best man -
that was my best man
forever.
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15 comments:
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Brief and nice take on the prompt, Karen.
I also like your wedding pics. Thanks for sharing your memories.
Your best man forever consoling you, very nice.
:)
first I thought it was sad and then the second part is sweet. I sort of read as two different tale, still very sweet
have a great day.
That was an interesting little spin you wove in there. Nicely done!
kinda sad...but then a happy ending...nice story for your prompt this week...
Karen, leave it to you to come up with something like this. Great photos, too!
Thanks for the link, and I did see the Jeff Daniels clip--very powerful!!
xoxo
It is the most marvelous moment to realize who you are meant to be with! As so many sad romances go, they often know somethings not right, but often one of them just won't get it, and so they carry on, unhappily.....
Great take on the prompt. This one touched like a sword...through and through! Nicely done!
Is it you in the blue wedding dress? Very daring and special.
Greetings,
Filip
I was so glad for a happy ending. I love a happy ending. I love the way you wrote this - beginning with what appeared to be the end of something, and at the end, turning into a beginning. Your pictures were perfect too. laurie @ http://dealingwithmyinnercritic.blogspot.com/
Well, that was certainly uplifting. (LOL?) (Hey, I know a little something about depression. For I'm a diehard Cowboys fan, and they're killing me again this season!)
fun twist
Have a lovely week-
Aloha from Waikiki
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Fantastic twist, I love this! Well done Karen, very well done!
Such lovely photos...so much written yet I wonder...what a great twist you have there in the end. Left me wondering....nice centus!!Mine is here
Have you a ROCKING AND BLESSED WEEK!!!
hugs
shakira
This was really cute!
Quite a different take on the prompt.
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