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Saturday, September 22, 2012

Saturday Centus - A Cracking Good Time For Mrs. Goodegg

Welcome to another - Flash Fiction - or, could it be a true story?

Jenny, from "Off on my tangent" blog presents to us

by way of me

Saturday Centus  no more than 103 words, any style of writing any photos and the prompt of
"blah, blah, blah!"



Searching for Mr. Rottenegg! By Mrs. Goodegg!




He, was raised inside this luxurious mansion with French doors branching from a balcony which overlooked a garden refined by hand-trimmed borders; while she, reached from the dregs of Skid Row.

...and still, they married.

But she grew weary of his complaints-

She'd respond with, “blah, blah, BLAH!”

 
Always using his subtle, almost mocking-inflected bitter voice, even after she successfully polishes his striking sixteen-foot high window, and masters her superior diligence of crafting each room with his desired opulence-

He'd still complain.

To which she replied, “blah, blah, blah” and


 

But,


 
I'd be very careful - hate to see you pushed off your wall!
 
 
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18 comments:

lissa said...

what a fun tale, I especially like how you incorporate the prompt into the tale, it works so well

hope you have a sweet day.

Karen S. said...

lissa- thanks so much!

Karen S. said...

Max and or Lisa- I'm betting if you see this, you'll know right where this mansion is! :)

Sue said...

Craaack!

Good one. This was fun.

=)

Filip and Kristel said...

Strange these comments of the eggs.

Greetings,
Filip

Judie said...

Hahahahaha! You are such a genious at this, Karen! Hey!! I think I know that guy!!

Karen S. said...

Judie- I know, he's quite familiar to me too!

黄清华 Wong Ching Wah said...

Fun story telling !

Gail said...

A wonderful story and crafted with wonderful talent.

Susan Mystery said...

You know, now I feel bad sitting here with fried eggs and toast. Poor Humpty. Love this!

tony said...

The Next Time Anyone Asks Me "How Do Like Your Egg" I Will Say I Prefer It BLAHED

Cloudia said...

What interesting doings in your world!


Aloha from Honolulu,
Wishing you a sweet week ahead!
Comfort Spiral
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Karen S. said...

Cloudia - I know, living a scrambled way of life is so much like a sunny-up kind of day!

darlin said...

LOL I'd be the first one to 'accidentally' push him off the wall! Excellent writing and I absolutely love the first photo of the mini castle!

ifthethunderdontgetya™³²®© said...

Poor Humpty was blithely unaware of the potential consequences of his actions.
~

gautami tripathy said...

So so good!

sepia tints

Karen S. said...

ifthethunderdontgetya - I'm not so sure, just look at his crafty expression! He's go so much more than just egg on his face! :)

Jenny said...

Karen!

I love this!

I read it several times and the way you crafted the words is brilliant!

Love, love.

Love.

This.