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Saturday, September 24, 2011
Saturday Centus 24 September Are you seriously ordering
THIS IS A SATURDAY CENTUS POST - Straight from Jenny's blog "off on my tangent" and we can use up to 150 words plus the six word prompt of
"Are you seriously ordering another martini?" But, in dialogue only.......so could we write fiction? We can write anything, just only in dialogue and NO pictures!
The other cool thing about this week's centus is the whole he said, she said, they said...with simple dialogue you could completely have no idea is it, he or she speaking? Unless, you were eavesdropping!
Here's my offering
“At the rate you’re slugging those martini’s down, you’ll need a million dollars and multiple lawyers if you don’t stop now.”
“Really smarty pants, you know this because?”
“I’m already defending you on another charge!”
“Well, it’s not everyday your ex marries your best friend and you’re invited to watch.”
“It might happen on The Good Wife.”
“Who?”
“Oh never mind. Just draw in your horns and let’s leave this point of no return now.”
“Not on your life. Pyrrhic victory or not, I'm staying!”
“Really, are you seriously ordering another martini?”
“How else will I have the courage to……..”
So come on now I just know you are all crazy about putting your own he said, she said, they said together, or at least reading some other ones, so go here
http://jennymatlock.blogspot.com/2011/09/saturday-centus-he-said-she-said-they.html
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17 comments:
Ooh, this is much better than reality Tv. I'm already into the characters and want to know what's said next. Great job, Karen.
xoRobyn
The courage to what, LOL. I could see why one would want to drink a whole lot if they were watching their ex marry their friend. Oh boy!!!
Is it the courage to go to the wedding of his ex?
I didn't think exes were ever invited according to all of the etiquette-books.
Clever use of the prompt.
Best wishes,
Anna
Anna's SC wk 73'Lunch with B&V'
Real housewives of New York? No, this is waaay better!!! Good job, Karen!!!
interesting!
Warm Aloha from Waikiki;
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You have such a fantastic imagination, great piece of writing but once again we're left in suspense. No worries, I can just imagine what happens next! lol
Have a fantastic Sunday!
Just love this! I love the interaction and oh my marrying the best friend! Great humor!
Blessings
to..? I want to know! lol, great sc :o)
An "I got friends in low places" sort of story. Good job!
Great post. Followed :)
Karen,
I love this. The dialogue is smooth and flowing, and you hooked me with the story!
Thanks and Namaste...............cj
Poor guy...do feel sorry for him...then maybe he deserved it...kept the room open with so many possibilities. Enjoyed this slippery conversation.
Very neat dialogue - clever:-)
to? to? I hope you're going to continue this! Really well written dialogue, I got caught up in this immediately. Great job.
The courage to - what? Oh no! Now I'm going to wonder all day.
Talk about a cliffhanger! So clever what you do with these prompts. Always fun.
I. Loved. This.
It was perfect! I read it to myself and then read it out loud and the dialogue was immensely believable.
You are a writing rock star.
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