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Image- Summer Night - 1913 - Albert Bloch
Shawl over Moon
The goddesses danced away
amongst the drifting haze
of summer's day-
like whispering shadows
gnawing away
familiar riddles
of destiny-
So quickly
their steps hastened
under a brilliant blue sky-
the goddesses
revelled in
autumn's intrusion.
As it slept
in an alleyway
under twilight shadows
waiting to descend -
waiting to descend -
stretching dimly ahead
this new
singing moon
overhead.
This post is for
Tess Kincaid
and Magpie Tales
Tess Kincaid
and Magpie Tales
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42 comments:
Brilliant wording."like whispering shadows gnawing away familiar riddles of destiny" did things to my head.... :D
I like this image. I am greeting
smiles...i like the thought of the moon singing overhead...interesting progression as well from destiny to alleyway
I like the image of the goddesses dancing and waiting to descend ~ I specially like the last stanza ~
Very ethereal ...loved it thank you x
i love that image karen...
and your words...
whispering shadows
twilight shadows waiting to descend
singing moon...
mysterious and (like Kez said) ethereal!
I like the picture you have created with your words, a singing moon sleeping in an alleyway...waiting.
I love this interpretation... !~!
all power to the goddesses everywhere... :)
Wonderful painting and the perfect poem to go with it!
love the moon singing overhead!
well done...enjoyed your words and thanks for sharing
Oh Karen, dancing goddesses and singing moons? Your poem doesn't need a picture you've drawn one of your own with words. The repetion of certain rhymes and words adds the detail.
I love the image of the singing moon overhead--I love it!
Shawl over moon... I just love that!
Beautiful words creating wonderful images.
love your imagery...yes. I can see it.
Ah, autumn , sunset , the time of water, what a relief it must be for gou all up there. ! . Very beautiful, Karen
" The goddesses revelled in autumn's intrusion"..brilliant line..as is all the rest!
I love the notion of a singing moon...
Oh so beautiful Karen! Familiar spirits of nature traditionally welcome spring, but I think autumn is a more richly colored season. The singing moon is indeed a lovely notion. Thank you for sharing this.=D
Lyrical and delightful:-)
Beautiful imagery here Karen....a wonderful write! :-)
In summer i like Shawl over Moon and whispering shadows gnawing away
familiar riddles of destiny.
the picture you have created with your words, a singing moon sleeping in an alleyway...waiting.
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