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Here I wait
in silent darkness
yesterday's cloud hangs heavy
over today's sunshine.
What was I scared of?
Being phased out no doubt
lost in
constant abrasion
of living in his shadows.
I feel so lost in the dark.
A puzzling melancholy
in the magic of this moment
knowing
someone had taken my place.
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Magpie Tales
Here I wait
in silent darkness
yesterday's cloud hangs heavy
over today's sunshine.
What was I scared of?
Being phased out no doubt
lost in
constant abrasion
of living in his shadows.
I feel so lost in the dark.
A puzzling melancholy
in the magic of this moment
knowing
someone had taken my place.
To view more posts for The Mag
at Magpie Tales
go here
http://magpietales.blogspot.com/2013/01/mag-150.html
20 comments:
interior dialogue on a sepia day. Nice
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Great depth to the thoughts in this.
I love the alliteration in this, and who hasn't known melancholy even in the magic of the moment?
Yes, exquisite poem, into the darkness I.
sad... I'm sure she'll find someone else soon...
I am sorry, that image capture ALL of my attention.
Oh so very sad...
Dark sad and beautiful Karen! :-)
Seeing this picture, makes you wonder what she is thinking.
Greetings,
Filip
Beautifully written; moving.
you captured the darkness of the prompt with your poem!
Oh, that's sad!
Gone but not forgotten, can she ever be truly pushed away ? . I have seen the most anal , patriarchal of men fussing around , tidying their house like a stepford wife !
"today's sunshine" - there is hope...
...quite a revelation to me of an injustice affair...she seems to still carry the classic disposition of women being just a mere accessories to men...no worth beyond bed hours... sad martyrdom mood you evoke here Karen...smiles...
How haunting. Both the image and the poem.
Beautiful sad write.
Anna :o]
I see a new start about to begin!
It's sad to be replaced, but it could be for the best!
Sad. Betrayals can be painful for a very long time.
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