My Mag is about the couple next to me.....
Dining alone can have it's advantages, depending on where you sit. This was not my first choice, but the hostess (thankfully) insisted.
Image by Joseph Lorusso and posted by Tess Kincaid
for Magpie Tales
I WANT WHAT SHE'S HAVING
(But my waitress ignored me.)
Note to self- Exchange your book for, True Romance beside you.
THE CHANGE-UP
Tearfully, she clung to him with hands trembling and legs tightening. My own mouth gaping from the explosion of their silent lovemaking. Lavishly she caressed his back, warmed by perspiration. So haunted by their urges, it was all so unbearable and far too insistent for me to ignore.
I spilled my wine glass,
-as his lips pressed harder. A soft little murmur of surrender set free, not theirs, but my own restless nature eager and hungry, there I was glued to the two intertwined until-
"Cut! Let's take a short break."
A ridiculous sense of stupidity fell over me, as
Ryan Reynolds and Sandra Bullock got up from the table.
For more posts for The Mag
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For more posts for The Mag
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http://magpietales.blogspot.com/2013/02/mag-155.html
33 comments:
very cute!!!!
You took me every direction!
A great teasing post. Nice one.
Clever twist! There's acting, and then...there is ACTING! Nicely penned!
Funny, I love it.
that's funny. you walk in, see that, and tell the waitress, i want what she's having. i LOVE it!!
Sandra! oh my yes you got it right!
thanks-
Very cute take on the prompt!!
Karen, I would like what she's having too!
Awesome! Talk about to gorgeous people, only in fairy tales eh?
Steamy!
Aloha to YOU
from Honolulu,
Comfort Spiral
~ > < } } ( ° >
Could have gone anywhere, in any direction if not for 'cut'! Nicely Karen!
Hank
YOU WANT TO STOP NOW?????????
Oh thank goodness for the 'Cut' it was getting quite steamy in there! Nice little twist at the end :)
Fabulous journeys you have taken me on.
I felt hot and sweaty
Ha
Hugs
SueAnn
Good gracious me.
lol... thanks for the giggles
bwa ha ha
Karen, you always just tickle me! This was great.
Kathy M.
So much going on here..I love the surprises!! Rich!
Such fun...twists and turns make for a good ride!
=)
very fun abd clever!
Very funny first picture.
Greetings,
Filip
Great job! I was sitting there right next to you, and...poof! It was over! Bravo!
Haha! Very clever!
Very cleverly crafted, Persephone !
Always fascinated by the great variety of responses to the same prompt. I smiled all the way through this one! Clever twist at the end...
(But my waitress ignored me.)
Never forget to topple your waitress!
~
Messy....I like it Karen! :-)
Oh my goodness...this really took my breath away. Such a great surprise ending, too!
a Good Menue!Happy Hour 2 for the price of one!
Did you offer Mr. Reynolds some personal coaching before the next take?
What a twist at the end! If it was my story, I might be pulling him off Sandra Bullock and asking him to duke it out :-)
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