"In the spring, at the end of the day, you should smell like dirt." - Margaret Atwood
Spring
1935
by Kuzma Petrov Vodin
For most, it's been a
CHILLY WAIT
no spring in sight
for me to write.
CHILLY WAIT
no spring in sight
for me to write.
* * * * * * * * * *
Spring, as it once was
pledges not, when it spawns
pledges not, when it spawns
fertile birth bemused
Winter's vivacious
clamor loomed beyond, teeming
peers of thunder trapped
clamor loomed beyond, teeming
peers of thunder trapped
Incredibly dank,
budless treescape evermore
ever grey, winds howl.
budless treescape evermore
ever grey, winds howl.
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16 comments:
i love that word 'dank'. just settles right down to the bone. :)
A nice group of haiku. Spring has sprung here at last.
The good doctor is right, lovely haiku verse.
Beautiful imagery. I can feel the anticipation for spring!!
For most, it's been a
CHILLY WAIT
no spring in sight
nothing but white, white, white!!!
Thank you for the sweet comment on my blog today. One more thing we have in common...
Yes!
ALOHA from Honolulu
Comfort Spiral
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I liked the last one a lot, but then wondered about swapping the words?
Incredibly dank,
budless treescape ever grey.
Evermore winds howl.
Just a thought...
Nice. Yes, spring came early last year and spoiled everyone. But the tips of the maples are turning red... And the weather is warm and rainy, but they're calling for a "winter's mix" at the end of the week.
Ahh Easter, Ostara, , East , Oestrus, all those tongues of flame descending, such joy, while down under in the Great Southland, we brace. Enjoy !
I would love to know what happened to spring. Beautifully expressed!
Spring is finally starting to spring here...
Nice painting, like the style.
Greetings,
Filip
I love the fact that when I need an escape, I can come to this website. Thank you, my friend.
According to Arlynda, there is a distinct "earthy" smell to me year around, and it is not all that pleasant. Double sigh and a groan.
Yep, it's been a long, long winter. Nice one.
i like dank budless treescape
Evaporate until you Lenticulate
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