How could our very own existence ever evolved into a world of, "I don't care?" and "Just one more scotch please?"
Well, our theme photo is asking just that for our magpie today. Thank you Tess Kincaid, at Magpie Tales.
THE MAG
Safeness in Confusion
The mind's distress is our body's disarray.
Halfway through this muddled mess
Impress and tidiness, not our nature.
Nurture our motion you say from disarray.
and
Array within our mistress of confusion
and
Array within our mistress of confusion
and
please
please
make your darn bed,
put away your junk
and do it today!
put away your junk
and do it today!
Ah yes, much better wouldn't you say?
18 comments:
Nicely done Karen
Yes MA`AM!
ALOHA from Honolulu
Comfort
Spiral
=^..^= <3
Yes, fine, I agree
In every neat freak theres a slob just waiting to get out ,
Gday Karen
Much nicer! LOL
Great first line!
"Yes, please" to the bottom room! This made me smile! :)
Ha ha! Yes, the second is much nicer (especially if it comes with maid service ; ) ) Thank you.
The final picture is much better. How can we persuade teenagers that it's the way to go? Witty piece!
Nice contrast!
That sounds like a plea from the heart at the poem's end!
Yes, much better. Nice write!
I can hear my mother now! Actually- I have become more like her as the years pass....smiles!
Sounds like someone knows this first hand? Lol! Nice take Karen!
That would be much better!
Anna :o]
I never make mine...
WoW! The last time I saw a suave bedroom like that we had to be out by 4pm as his missus got home at 5....!
Seriously though - a fabulous write, Karen, and a fabulous before and after comparison. Be an idea for me to bookmark this poem!!
What may be one person's mess is another's carefully constructed pile!
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