"One minute you're on top of the world, the next minute some secretary's running you over with a lawn mower." - Joan Holloway
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WHAT A WOMAN WANTS
Unable to accept his, no!
she stacked her luggage high
her premise quite clever
she took to the top.
Her prose a critical touch
with existential poise
of peerless fashion all to win his approval.
As each stomp of her foot
broke deep beneath his blasphemous cursing-
his NO!
hammered with mallet-like stabs
of incoherent growls of control-
and so she grinned, bursting
in uncontrollable laughter.
Yet her rousing
sudden eruption
of endless energy that seized
through her pounding
heels of determination
he bellowed again, NO!
Still unable to accept no-
she lit a match
and burned his plane ticket
she'd vacation solo.
15 comments:
Snow getting you down, Karen?
Very nice!
;-)
Sounds fair enough. Potentially expensive way of making a point, but, hey...
Nice twist.
"You're a crazy woman," Killroy mumbled.
now we know where your sublimated bitch has gone: into this poem! Cause K would never burn his tik
ALOHA from Honolulu
ComfortSpiral
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oh, you devil! :)
you made me smile...:)
Haha - A daring move as she vacationed solo.
a poem fun! The ticket was round? or back ?.
As my granny would have said, "temper, temper!" :)
I am rolling!!!!
Good for her.
Hope she enjoys every quiet moment.
I'm just in that kind of mood. ;-)
atta girl! Don't take "NO" for an answer!
Way to go girl! Loved this write ..more please.
It was a revolutionary road that she must stepford carefully !
Well done and happy new year , Karen
Oh yes, this is brilliant!
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