While snapping pictures we noticed a bald man following us.
Who was he shooting? Always steps behind us, he was annoying. His phone rang and we overheard, "That many bodies? I'll soon know where."
Confused, we concentrated on his target, keeping a safe distance behind.
....would he ever stop?
What was that blue thing he dropped?
Finally, he turned at this wall. Hanging back, we shot pictures like tourists, until .......
He used a key and slipped inside. When we turned around Mr. C.I.A.-man had vanished. Now it was obvious what he was looking for and.... "we know where all the bodies are buried...."
To be continued....
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26 comments:
Brave soul to follow a suspcious man...now days I am leery of even looking at someone twice!
O.K. way to hook me in and have me clambering for MORE...Excellent, suspenseful read !!!
loved it. you must tell me more about the bald man, and what was the blue thing he dropped
sweeet...you're going to have to tell us what happens!
Cough it up, Karen! TELL US MORE!! Hahaha!A nice mystery you're developing here!
xoxo
Intriguing. Most intriguing...
=)
This is entirely eerie and amusing. That bald man's done some shooting, alright. Can't wait for more!
xoRobyn
screen play!
Aloha from Waikiki
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OOH, I could here the 'Twilight Zone' music playing as I read your tantalizing mystery. What brave souls you were. Great job!
Jann
Fantastic idea with the pictures giving us a glimpse into the tale. Hope to see more.
I love this concept of adding photos to your story... fantastic writing and the photos really add to it! Have a great week Karen!
Okay...now I'm hooked, I want to read the next installment! (What a great pairing of story to photographs!)
Special article, I am already curious for the second part.
Greetings,
Filip
Is following someone who talks on their cell phone about the locations of bodies a good idea? :)
I love these. You are so clever.
another cliffhanger ... i cant wait to read the end!
Why is it always bald men doing the deed? lol You weave a great visual story, Karen.
Hi Karen,
I accidentally ran across your blog. Great idea letting the photos tell the story. You may (or may not) also enjoy my main blog. In the recent post I interview myself.
Regards,
Neil
Great photos and wonderful story ..... namaste, Carol ^_^ ~ thanks for coming by my blog ~ and I love your blog! Great job!
nice photos and great story telling karen!
this bald man didn't have a...uh...rolled up carpet slung over his shoulder....did he?!!
Neil, thanks for stopping by. I'd enjoy checking out your blog, once I find where it is! I'll recheck Jenny's !
Kelly, thanks for stopping by...you are so right, it's not the greatest idea at all! ha ha
This gave me a good chuckle!!
Well done!!
:)~
HUGZ
I'm sure he was just filming some kind of documentary or, something. Maybe that was a piece of film package that he dropped, why do people always have to litter. : )
Didn't yer momma ever teach you surveilance??:)
Uh oh. I hope you're not going to try and continue this with the peas in a pod prompt...although, if anyone could pull that off it would be you for sure!
Loved the suspense.
I love the pictures!
Really, really clever going this week dear Karen.
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