Welcome to Saturday Centus, on Saturday.
The prompt this week: Write 100 words about the picture above
Number of words: No more than 100 total
Style of writing: Any
Additional Pictures: Any
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My Best Defense
My Best Defense
Soundless thoughts surround me
as I toss and turn
through the horizon
of my awareness.
Everything aglow
beneath the distant roar.
Eerie lights against my face
thunder echoed beneath
groaning clouds
and fat raindrops
against my face.
Oh so many times
my thoughts wander in my half-slumber
as I'm
awakened by
reflections of
life
But it's thunder
that worries me most
and smelling electricity
through the air
that worries me most
and smelling electricity
through the air
and cracks of lightning
filling the room
around me
flashing down all around me.
Until that one certain flash of lightning
strikes deep within
Until that one certain flash of lightning
strikes deep within
I know
through the shutters of belief
this too shall pass.
For more Saturday Centus posts with Jenny, at "Off on my tangent"
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12 comments:
You did a really classic job with that. Some great lines, Karen.
Aloha
Wonderful, and completely calls up the feeling of lying awake in a storm.
I enjoyed your sensory images.
Absolutely spellbinding! Wonderful imagery! I loved this!
You really got the ambience right. Well done.
=)
I never understood how you make a picture like the one with the lightning.
Greetings,
Filip
Excellent writing of a classic literary device 'stream of consciousness'...Nicely done Karen !!! ;)
Karen: You are the James Joyce of poetic imagery. Excellent!
If the thunder don't get ya, then the lightning will.
;-)
I so dislike when storms like that happen during the night and wake me up. Scary!
Wow. What intense imagery.
This was really powerful!
I like the way you can interpret the words on different levels!
Karen this is remarkable! Have you ever thought of publishing? The writing you do should be published, it's that good!
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